Antonhy kieds - the legends of the legends
Antonhy is a famous funk rock star actually he is lead singer of Red Hot Chilli Peppers, he and his band already made ten albuns and chsanged the band members 28 times.
He was born grand Rapids michigan on the hospital at 5 am, on the day first of november of 1962 but, only a five weaks later he moved to California.
He studied at school fairfax he met Michceel baezary ( who turned flea some years later), and hillel slowak when he has 12.Hillel played guitar at band wat is it? and he toed to flea how to play bass, and show a friend jack irons.
Their flowr make a band RED HOT CHILI PEPPERS.
The bans suffred a lot of changes but flea and antonhy kieds never pass on day out of the band.Everithing was okay will hilled die with only 26 years (he did because of his drug addiction,and Jacks get out of band.The pepper almost over but they found Jhon Frushand and Chad smith.the band realsed on 1991the blood suger sex magik and was the first biasucces.Jhon Frishand getas out and reaurned to badn and stay there till 2009.

He was born grand Rapids michigan on the hospital at 5 am, on the day first of november of 1962 but, only a five weaks later he moved to California.
He studied at school fairfax he met Michceel baezary ( who turned flea some years later), and hillel slowak when he has 12.Hillel played guitar at band wat is it? and he toed to flea how to play bass, and show a friend jack irons.
Their flowr make a band RED HOT CHILI PEPPERS.
The bans suffred a lot of changes but flea and antonhy kieds never pass on day out of the band.Everithing was okay will hilled die with only 26 years (he did because of his drug addiction,and Jacks get out of band.The pepper almost over but they found Jhon Frushand and Chad smith.the band realsed on 1991the blood suger sex magik and was the first biasucces.Jhon Frishand getas out and reaurned to badn and stay there till 2009.
Your text is ok, and it is clear you wrote it yourselves, which is VERY GOOD. But it is a little disorganized... No Capital Letters on names, many mistakes...
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